Sunday 3 May 2015

Five Sentence Fiction - Departure


Five Sentence Fiction time again folks thanks to Lillie McFerrin.

http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-departure/

This week’s prompt is: Departure.

Hope you enjoy. Please leave a comment. I appreciate the feedback.

 

Mistaken Identity

Gerard answered his mobile when he saw it was his twin brother Dean ringing, maybe he’d have an explanation about his girlfriend, Amy, where she’d gone and the reason her spare key to his apartment was left on the table. He’d contacted her friends and relatives but they refused to tell him where she was or how to get in contact, they seemed furious with him but no one would explain the reason for her sudden departure.

“Hey Gerard, look I wanted to apologise for using your spare key while you were away, bro, it had been worth it though and I promise you, I changed sheets.”

“I’ve no idea what you’re talking about, Dean, I’m only in the door.”

 “Crap! Who walk in on us so if it wasn’t you?”

 

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6 comments:

  1. Well, this is intriguing. I would like to know more.

    Thank you for your comment on mine. I agree with you.

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  2. Well, this is intriguing. I would like to know more.

    Thank you for your comment on mine. I agree with you.

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  3. Sounds like Gerard is going to have a tough time explaining this...

    Good story!

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    1. Thanks, Mary.

      Reminds me of the Shaggy's song...'It wasn't me'

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